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Editorial Review Board Comments

“I liked how there were reflection sections to recap what happened in the article.”

“A suggestion I would give is next time you should add more details about how you can sample bees. Other than that this was a great article and I loved how I was able to learn about different kinds of bees, how to sample them, and how lawn mowing is both good and bad. “

“I found this article very interesting, and educational. It taught me a lot about pollination, before I had read these articles, I didn’t understand thoroughly how animals pollinate flowers.”

“The most important thing I learned was that there are much more pollinators other than bees.”

“The most useful graphic is probably figure 3 on page 9 which shows the Stigma and Anthers. It is useful because I didn’t have any idea what the Stigma and Anthers looked like. It gave me a visual idea and it helped me connect to memories I had of other flowers that had the Stigma and Anthers.”

“A comment/ suggestion I have for Natural Inquirer is to have a white background instead of the lightly tinted green background because it would be easier to read. “

“I think it would be very helpful if you included a few footnotes under words instead of having a glossary (The footnote would include the meaning of the word). I think this is more efficient than having to look at a glossary, and rereading the whole section.”

“I learned that mowing less (about every two weeks) can help the bee population.”

“You should add a part about how this effects your readers. Good luck!”