Gail Bennett and Rachel Edmondson Classes View All Classrooms Gail Bennett and Rachel Edmondson Classes Brethren Middle School Brethren, MI Editorial Review Board Comments “I learned that many cedars are dying and we need to help them.” “Condense the article.” “It looks pretty good. You could put the cover photo courtesy on the inside of the cover.” “Exchange the word ‘illustration’ for the figure number.” “The compass rose needs to be a little sharper.” “I think the article is perfectly fine in my opinion.”
“I learned that many cedars are dying and we need to help them.”
“Condense the article.”
“It looks pretty good. You could put the cover photo courtesy on the inside of the cover.”
“Exchange the word ‘illustration’ for the figure number.”
“The compass rose needs to be a little sharper.”
“I think the article is perfectly fine in my opinion.”